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28-12-2009, 04:20 AM
(This post was last modified: 18-02-2010 02:17 AM by Dan.)
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UTS: The Plot
Quote:They came with no warning. No one had time to prepare. It was the day that the most famous school of Witchcraft and Wizardry had fallen. Large parts of the castle and its grounds had been destroyed in the largest attack the wizarding world had seen. Bodies lay everywhere like bullets on the ground. Screams from students and staff alike echoed off the walls of the place where they were supposed to be safe. The summer evening's sky was an array of deep oranges and reds. It was a peaceful evening in London city centre. The hustle that would ensue in just 10 or 11 hours would take all of that away. A man stood on his apartment balcony, his head up in the air as he starred into the sky. He took in a deep breath of the polluted city air, exhaling slowly as he looked down at the expensive watch on his wrist. It wasn't like his owl to be late. If it had been any other person this would have been insignificant, but for him it was far from that. His eyes scanned the horizon for any sign of his owl. It was several minutes before his eyes caught a glimpse of something, far in the distance. He recognised it almost immediately, but something was different. It usually carried a fairly heavy load of letters. Today it carried just a single note, wrote on a scruffy bit of parchment. The owl landed on the balcony and began to peck at its master. The man petted the bird with one hand as he tried to untie the parchment with the other. He glanced at the front of the letter. Printed onto it on block capitals were the words "For the Minister". The man frowned as he opened the folded piece of parchment and began to read the enclosed message. His expression changed from a frown to that of awe. He tapped the owl on its head gently, and it flew away. He turned around and walked indoors towards his fire place. A bowl lay on the coffee table filled with a dust like material. He furiously took a handful of the dust and threw it into the fire. "The Ministry of Magic", he said, defining each syllable as if he was almost spelling it out. There was a breeze of air and he was absorbed into the fire. The piece of parchment lay on the coffee table next to the bowl of dust. It was folded in such a way that only the bottom of the note could be seen. It read, "Signed, Deputy Headmaster of Hogwarts. The School of Witchcraft and Wizardary." He arrived at the Ministry. The quiet and tranquil surroundings of the Ministry were only hampered by a single man's footsteps. They were defined, sharps steps from a man who meant business. The steps became less frequent until there were no more that could be heard at all. The man uttered a few words under his breath generating a spark at the tip of his wand. The spark vanished almost instantly as if it had split into several different pieces and had been given a set destination to go to. Indeed it had been given a set of destinations to go to. It took just a minute before the tranquillity of the hall was eliminated. Wizards and witches of all different shapes and sizes were appearing out of thin air talking to one another as they walked towards the man. They were all puzzled as to why he had brought them back here at such a time. There was one final 'poof' as the final official made his way towards the minister. As he walked closer to the crowd the others fell silent, and just one of the crowd spoke out. "What is it, minister?", they asked with a concerned tone to their voice. "The school", he replied. These two words created a stir within the crowd which was quickly dampened with the shrill cry of a small woman close to the front of the crowd. "When?!", she shouted, causing several of the crowd to squirm with intolerance at the high pitched scream. "I received a note just half an hour ago", the minister said, his eyes fixed on the crowd. He quickly continued, eager to keep the attention of all those present. "It's genuine, signed by the man himself. I propose that a group of us head out there now to see for ourselves, led by me". This created another stir, instantly creating a divide between the crowd. Several members of the ministry backed off, whilst others stood behind the minister. It would take some time before they believed what had happened. And so the group of ministers vanished into thin air leaving the remainder behind to discuss what they had been told. One thing was for sure: things were about to change. [/quote]
[/quote] Just a draft so far. I'd like to hear what you think, along with any suggestions or questions you may have. ![]() |
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28-12-2009, 09:04 PM
(This post was last modified: 28-12-2009 09:05 PM by James Mack.)
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RE: UTS: The Plot
Cool, but what next? What are we role playing? Students in the first year of a new Hogwarts? Or those that discovered it? I vant details!
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29-12-2009, 01:18 AM
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RE: UTS: The Plot
We are role playing from two months after this has happened.
The ministry has found out that the castle has been discovered, along with Tool and my character, they have been interviewed by the MoM as well as various newspapers and the wizarding press. The school is opening for a new term, and the first topic will be the opening ceremony. ![]() |
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31-12-2009, 12:22 AM
(This post was last modified: 31-12-2009 12:23 AM by Kkytha.)
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RE: UTS: The Plot
So all incomers don't have to be first years, right?
EDIT: WOAHHHH a sig??? ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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01-01-2010, 06:38 PM
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RE: UTS: The Plot
cool, sounds good so far, but isn't that just starting off the plot like the old forum. Is there going to be anything different other than the school reopening after being found again? It would be a little boring if everything just went back to normal...
It's not easy to distinguish good from evil. Sinners can surprise you. And the same is true for saints. Why do we try to simply distinguish people as good or evil? Because no one wants to admit that compassion and cruelty can live side by side in one heart. And that anyone is capable of anything...
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01-01-2010, 09:19 PM
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RE: UTS: The Plot
What we need... is a bad guy. But not just another Dark Lord. We need something new - perhaps an evil, sadistic school teacher who has infiltrated the school and canes the children when Dan isn't looking? How about he tries to raise an army out of school children? And bring down the Ministry?
Yes, I did construct that paragraph as I went along. |
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02-01-2010, 08:02 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-01-2010 05:01 PM by Dan.)
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RE: UTS: The Plot
(31-12-2009 12:22 AM)Kkytha Wrote: So all incomers don't have to be first years, right? People can be who they want... more or less. (01-01-2010 06:38 PM)Jenni Wrote: cool, sounds good so far, but isn't that just starting off the plot like the old forum. Is there going to be anything different other than the school reopening after being found again? It would be a little boring if everything just went back to normal... You have a good point there. We'll open it differently. (01-01-2010 09:19 PM)James Mack Wrote: What we need... is a bad guy. But not just another Dark Lord. We need something new - perhaps an evil, sadistic school teacher who has infiltrated the school and canes the children when Dan isn't looking? How about he tries to raise an army out of school children? And bring down the Ministry? We do, I agree again. Not someone who's openly evil, but someone who is secretly brewing up evil within the school walls. I like it. EDIT: Check part two - additions and edits are appreciated. ![]() |
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26-01-2010, 10:01 AM
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RE: UTS: The Plot
Cool.
Is it possible some students weren't there when Hogwarts went up in flames? |
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27-01-2010, 03:38 AM
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RE: UTS: The Plot
Hey....why can't the teach be a hot young female...? Less suspicion....
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27-01-2010, 09:15 PM
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RE: UTS: The Plot
the teacher? Don't you mean the evil person?
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